This is a pretty short part, since there wasn't really much that they had to go through. I've been planning to introduce Theia since I began the story, but I waited so long because I needed it to be a believable amount of time before she was born and that Stephen would have still not known about her at the beginning of the story.
One thing I'd like to point out that isn't explicitly said and may not be for awhile (And that my Editor was a little confused about) is that the other Stephen is helping them to get favors from Pepper. Basically every time things go down or whenever he needs magical expertise, he can go straight to her because he knows that she can't refuse to help him after he's helped the Betweeners on her behalf so much. (All Iron Mans = Dickish, apparently by my writing).
Some misc. stuff about the houses/foundation and things: Kal helped put the frame together to keep the piece of land as structural as possible (The frame runs through the land as well, and Tony has already made couplings so that adding onto it would be easy. He wants to build a Burger King.)
Oh, and I totally made up that stuff about Faltine. It could be true, they're not human. /shrug
Not much else to say until the next part. :P
-EDR
Oh, and I totally made up that stuff about Faltine. It could be true, they're not human. /shrug
Not much else to say until the next part. :P
-EDR
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