This won't be nearly as long as the last one, but only because it's a shorter chapter.
Way back when I was writing the part after Sorcery and Specters, I had started to take a different approach to Martha's disappearance. Without going into too many details about it, it was more focused on making as many jumps as possible in a short amount of time, with each jump/chapter being something like a mini-story. Well, it didn't work out, and that was because I couldn't really focus in on any specific thing, but something that did happen was Stephen/Diana's first kiss via an accidental visit to an Earth they'd already gone to and a trip through Robinson Park again (Like in Ghosts).
The last chapter of Glass Roses was supposed to fill in for this hole in continuity, but ended up in a much different direction (Because I'd been wanting to do something like Hunter and the Moon for awhile, and it was the perfect opportunity to do it), but then I still had to fill the hole for the break in continuity!
So, while also having their moment, which I couldn't have feasibly stretched to an entire part, I also included a 'family date' for Kal, Tony, and Franklin (+Baby Theia), because I like Mini-Golf, and I think it's funny that Kal would totally not get it at all because he was raised Russian.
And of course Franklin would be using his powers to cheat to get ice cream. :P
-EDR
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