Aftermath In Depth

So, just as a heads up, the dates that I had on my profile page before were before I knew that I was moving this week. We're leaving on Thursday and not expecting to get out there until at least Saturday, but probably Sunday. When we do get out there, we'll be staying with someone else for awhile, while my moms' new house clears, so I don't know how reliable the internet will be while we're staying somewhere else. We don't know exactly when we're going to moving into our own house, since we have a few houses to look at when we do get out there, but I'm hoping that we can move in right away. Even then, I don't know when we'll be able to have access to internet from our new house, as we try to set everything up.

I really wanted to update at least once a week for all of October, since its' the second anniversary coming up on the 19th, but I'll have to make up the lost time when I can. I'm really weighing out the pros and cons of just updating twice tonight, so I won't have to worry so much about being behind by a large amount.

Anyways, onto my notes of the chapter. The BIG change in this chapter (Which happened last chapter, but now we get a good look at it), is what happened to J'onn. I sort of drew inspirations from a few sources, all of them being J'onn. Well, except for one, who's J'onns' ancestor.

J'onn J'onzz from Generation Lost and J'onn J'onzz from the Amalgam Universe

These are the first two that I took inspiration from, specifically just the fact that J'onn is shown as much, much older (Which in many variations, he is, even for a Martian, but doesn't outwardly show it), but also physically much weaker, even if just visually looking weaker.

J'onn J'onzz from the cover of Martian Manhunter Vol 2 #11, and J'ahrl J'onzz from the cover of Martian Manhunter Vol 2 #25

These two were also used as inspiration from a visual standpoint... maybe J'ahrl less so. I wanted to (at least) convey the look of J'onn as sort of a 'pudding' through words, and a lot of this came from all four of these pictures.

Another major change was Peppers' chapter in this part. In this chapter, it had been Pepper speaking with Diana, instead of Pepper speaking with Barbara. I had to rewrite most of the conversation to fit, but kept the intent of the conversation much of the same.

I also had to delete a Diana chapter as well, one that was primarily a conversation between herself and Stephen, though it can't take place at all now (Even if I did try to put it into a later chapter), because it dealt with something that got taken out entirely during the Battle of Fate.

But that's about all I have to talk about in this part.

-EDR